“ It was interesting if not informative. I sugar coat what I write, especially the dialogue. I am still surprised when people continue to ask me if what I do is fiction even after I explain that fact that what I do is simply report the experiences I have with the outlaw community. 20.00 a pop whore was a real person till her murder and she lived her life that way and Lowlife is a real person and he really did kill 20.00 a pop.
The whole point of the introduction was missed by the reviewers which was; these people lived their lives to please themselves and the woman had children that were the real victims. That is the part the reviewers wanted to do away with. I did find out about hyphenated words and punctuation. Good deal. I will strive to clarify for readers based on some of the advice I got and other stuff I will leave just like it is written because that is the way it is and I like it that way.
Be Blessed;
Harm.....................:) ”
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